I NEED HELP WITH MY STORY!!!!!!posted Sep 9th 2008, 10:38PM
Mood: Ashamed
I am making a Naruto fanfiction were a girl named Arekkusu Hoshi falls in love with Itachi Uchiha, another girl named Ariana Manami falls in love with Sasuke Uchiha and the girl Arekkusu thinks she has only four years to live because Orochimaru is after her. I dont know how to start it though :(
Ive got the prologue down but I need the first chapter..
Here is some things about Arekusu and Ariana.
Arekkusu Hoshi:
Rank: Chunnin
Age: 14
Favorite element: Fire
Best friend: Ariana Manami
Hair color: Reddish brown
Eye color: Light blue, the color of the sky
Favorite color: Blue, black and red.
Least favorite color: Pink
Least favorite memories: Her fathers death, killing her mother on accident, When she met Itachi (again) at age 14, and The haunting thing that her parents hid that her spirit she killed the Yakamana clan (Itachi told her at age 14).
Favorite memories: Being saved by Itachi at the age of 6, becoming friends with Ariana, becoming friends with Sasuke, getting her team (Sasuke, Naruto and herself), hurting Itachi (age 14), fighting Itachi and Kisame, learning chidori and hellfire jutsu, becoming chunnin, and meeting Itachi (age 6)
Team: Sasuke And Naruto, sensei is Kakashi.
Arekkusu's life is really complicated
Ariana Manami
Rank: Chunnin
Age: 14
Favorite element: Grass
Best friend: Arekusu Hoshi
Hair color: Blonde
Eye color: choclate brown
Favorite color: Pink
Least favorite color: Orange
Least favorite memories: The Akatsuki killed her clan (Itachi wasn't in the Akatsuki yet), Arekkusu meeting Itachi (Because she is afraid she might leave for Itachi), Itachi killing the Uchiha clan (because she was taken care for there)
most favorite memories: Meeting Arekkusu, Meeting Sasuke, becoming a chunnin.
Team: Neji and Kiba
There you go, If you want more info on them tell me.